War of Many Facets OOC

I am in, if ya still want me? I will have to check my character but otherwise I am ready. I am sorry for the late answer but I have had a lot of rl issues to handle before I had time to get back to you guys.

Let's see, I promised you to let you hear what I though about the story/game so far, and here it is.

Fase1

Being a new player to planewalker, I really enjoyed the first act. I was struck by the fact that this city of glass was alien and interessting which captured my attention. It was a good idea of using the ice genasi guide. 

The work for Thalivan was somewhat vague since there were some misunderstanding in the beginning, that we met him in sigil and he became a object of mistrust. That created some uncertainty, is he is trying to help the city or not, which is good.

Finding the bodies of men that have been sucked dry was a shocker even though we could tell something was fishy before we entered the store. The whole mystery solving part was fun and mindwretching but I wished that it was a bit longer, in that sense that we would first meet the facets later in the game to reveal that they were the bad guys behind that attack. Perhaps meet more individuals that have been sucked dry throughout the game and finally confront them, so other fights would be monsters, henchmen or servants until that point. This would of course alter the story a little bit, but creating that tension for the players not knowing what they are up against would only benefit your good story.

The fight could have been a bit harder but was indeed entertaining.

My last comment to this fase, is that I wanted to state, that I don't know whats up ahead, so that my presumptions about the facets being the main bad guy and other stuff might be far off.

Fase 2

Here I have almost nothing to say, It was good. I do have some comments though:

The Drachmir: The hound was pretty awesome and I like the fact we couldnt boss him around. I am still pissed that I had to pay him so much for the info, nah just joking .

Inn:The in was lavish and nicely described

The Fight: I liked the fact it was a rescue mission and that we had to protect Ghadir. Still a bit too easy.

Sharish: I am really hoping that we will meet him later in the game since he is pretty cool.

Ghadir: Well, I like the fact that after we saved him he almost bailed on us. This was surprising and created another situation for the players to overcome which they thought was granted by saving him, a bit of twist, I like that.

Well, that was it, I hope you can use my comments and suggestions.