The Tanar'ri, or The Rough Drafts...

Succubi are supposed to be sexy. I'm not sure why this one isn't. Might be the hairdo.

Yeah, I think the redone succubus looks better.

definatly better.

The proportion's off on the succubus; its legs are much too short.

I would try to avoid such harsh outlines as well.

Okay then (cracks knuckles) you asked for it.

Marilith: The eyes are off center, and kinda weird. I think the arms are two thin, and it may look beeter if it had some sort of battle scars, thy are fighers, after all.

Dretch: I like, but It may be better it it was'nt from a heads on view.

Alu-fiend: I like the new one. Much better, the first one looked very two dimensional.

Vrock: I love it.

Quasit: It seems too cute. I know that they're not supposed to be very imposing, but that one looks like a pet.

The Cambion doesnt seems very fiendish, just evil. Horns might do the trick.

As for the Babau, I like it, actually.

Those are just minor details I think you should fix. All in all, I really like your drawing stly, and I think it fits well into the original feel of planescape.

Note: Here's a Quasit I drew, I'll put it in Artist's Alley if nobody wants it probably...

The reproportioned succubus looks much better. The vrock colouring looks off, but that could be mostly because I'm used to the purple vrock in the MM. There's no reason a vrock couldn't be green, though - tanar'ri never were very big on conformity.

It might be helpful, Ophelia, if you look at real people as references. Try Google Image Search to find some quick models.

And see this page: http://www2.evansville.edu/drawinglab/map.html. Pay special attention to the section on proportions - all your figures are a little off.

oh and im sure Fridrikon will see me participating in all this and he'll maim me for not working on my eladrin final copies, and so i say to him , good sir! the rough drafts are done, (some hehe) and i will you to scanith them and i shall post away, for confirmation from others, then shall i begin the finals. actuallly i dont care what they or you say about my first guy, hes so cool i wanna keep him forever.

The arms aren't bad, actually, though the muscular and skeletal structure in the torso could use a little touching up.

Note where the ribs are. No matter how muscular he is, the ribs make a difference. You can see the ribs between his pects and angling down underneath them.

Also, look at how the abdominals are shaped and how they fit relative to both the pectorals and the muscles on the side of his torso.

I don't mind that the balor isn't proportioned like a human, incidently; he doesn't need to be.

I think the nalfeshnee is quite good, by the way.

Hello Ophelia.

You do have the personalities of the beings well done in the images.
I like the first guy a lot.

On the other ones might I suggest giving them a bit more curve. For the Glabrezu you have the parts where they should be, but his torso from the chest down is bulged out. And his ribs go too far straight down his body. They would be more angled.
When I do the male form (especially for those big muscular boys) I like to make their torso to their shoulders almost like a triangle. The shoulders would be the base of the triangle and then their body would slim down from there. But remember that the male body is not square, they do have the most subtle curve in the waist area and pronunciation where their ribs are located. Your image of the Molydeus is also a little too square.
I would say look at the bodies of body builders or guys like pro wrestlers and stuff and see how their torso's are situated.

Really though they are coming along nicely, and with a little more work on anatomy I'm sure you're gonna blow people away with your ability.
You've got the talent.

btw your standing succubus, I like her face.

Some humble sigestions:
Glabrezu:
- Draw Schwarzenegger, now erase his head and draw a doberman's head connected to the neck or even a more bloody anubis head. A pitbull's or rottweiler would also be a good idea. Check out the big monster from "We 3" to get a good idea of a atrocious dog. Cerberus as a last resort.
Now append other two similar arms to the torso, but replace the hands for lobster claws (attetion for the little balls on the surface, they're important details).
The concept for Glabrezu is really good and rather hard to come up with, so congratulations.

Molydeus:
Why not trying the same and putting the snake to com e out from somewhere really scary, like the dog's throat?
The hammer could as well be more rounded, if you look at the hammer in "Mario RPG: Legend of the Seven Stars", you should get a good idea of what I am talking about.

The Nabassu is really well-conceived. It looks like a bat to me, so why not connect his wings to his arms? He needs only to be made more demoniac. It is really good indeed. About the skull, making it more real will considerabily ger the art better.

I really took the artistic side of the thing. Unfortuantely, I do not know of I attained to the concepts in the books, so regard my sugestions for as long as they are relevant.

Keep on with the good work and search the internet for a techinque called cross-hatching (or just hatching, which is a good one too). This is a shading technique that, when well-used, makes the drawing simply spectacular. Just take a look at a manga named Berserk to see what I mean.

I hope I was able to help.

Excelent idea, although it might prevent the bad guy from biting... Unless, of course, another mouth is put on his belly.
Cambion can be improved... enhancing its armor. Succubus is really sexy, but do not be afraid to make it look liek an evil version of Striperella.
Can I draw and post some stuff here too?