I would like to post that I'm currently working on the Fated writeup, which I'll post here when I'm done. My current ideas:
The Fated are currently one of the most powerful factions, even though still the most mistrusted. They were the first to get on the technology boat and support it, thus reaped the benefits. Thus, they own most of the major technology corporations.
The Fated are facing a split between their Lawful members and their Chaotic members, who are already camped in sub-factions. Currently, the Lawful sub-faction has the upper-hand. This is reflected in their new choice of headquarters, Acheron.
The Factol is a human "lich" named Griffin, born blind yet pratices self-taught magic. A prodigy, he invented a unique way of achieving lichdom. As a result, he has two vacuous tunnels instead of eyes, each ending in a speck of light. A Fated legend was that, in an attempt to see, Griffin stole two stars from the prime material plane and placed them inside a titanic demiplane inside his skull. Griffin is Lawful Evil to the core.
Any suggestions or comments?
I'm really curious about this not-quite-a-lich. I'm cool if you decide to make him all mysterious and rumour-surrounded, but I hope there's at least more mystery and rumour about him in the writeup.
Pants of the North!