I love planewalker's little planar quotes! I'm pretty sure this one should read:
"Ever notice how you see rogue Modrons, but never see a rogue Slaadi?"
(If there's a better place to report grammatical errors, I'm all ears, btw.)
I love planewalker's little planar quotes! I'm pretty sure this one should read:
"Ever notice how you see rogue Modrons, but never see a rogue Slaadi?"
(If there's a better place to report grammatical errors, I'm all ears, btw.)
No, Devis, dragons can only see you if your moving, I'm sure of it.
should be...
No, Devis, dragons can only see you if you're moving, I'm sure of it.
Thanks!
Quote? You desire a quote? The ONE and THE PRIME does not give 'quotes.'
— Primus to a barmy Guvner record-keepr who somehow got into the Central Chamber
Methinks someone missed an e. Thanks!
"Oh, peace will come to multiverse like Harmonium says, it will be one minute after its end that is."
"Oh, peace will come to multiverse like the Harmonium says -- the moment it ends." is grammatically correct and I think more striking.
"Oh please, its not like the Modron March ever hurt anybody!
— A Clueless just before being trampled to death by two dozen Modrons"
This one is a contraction of 'it is', so it should be it's.
At least with tieflings you can be sure, that sooner or later they'll stab you in the back.
— Mirlus Semperhar
Somebody forgot a 'be'!
I'd also suggest dropping the comma; it implies a pause that shouldn't be there.
Finally found one:
Welcome to Elysium, I hope you don't enyoy your stay - common Oceanus greeting
Nice catch, Palomides! Unfortunately, I've started to see quotes that I've posted corrections for be recycled without being changed. So, is anyone editing? I don't even know who maintains the part of the site that cycles these quotes.
"Stupid Primes and there Codecies-they write books full of nonsense, their fellow Clueless take 'em as fact, and before you know it, I got a bunch of new neighbors!"
— A Babau
The bolded word should be 'their.' Also, the plural of 'codex' is 'codices.'
Hey, I found another showgirl of Mechanus!
"This is not war! This is pest control!"
— Rouge Modron Dark 64 and his opinion on Formian invasion on Mechanus.
"Gods? I pray to them and they give me spells. I think is a fair trade."
Also, 'is' should probably be 'it's.'