Material cut from Ecology of the Keepers in Dragon 353

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Material cut from Ecology of the Keepers in Dragon 353

The following are various bits of material that were cut out of the article during the editing process before it went to print.

This bit was removed from the 'History of the Keeper' section:

"Some stories claim that the keepers resulted from the first, abortive attempt by the gods to create inevitables, or a flawed attempt to mimic those beings of Law by a deity of Chaos. Others claim that a long dead god of secrets created them, and that now alone and abandoned, they perpetually seek to uphold their creator’s tenets even as that god slips further and further into oblivion. Still others claim that the keepers are some form of living illusions, or even sentient protomatter, first spawned and given true substance and definition within the Deep Ethereal, either by intent or by mistake."

The following section was cut entirely:

"Alternative Keeper Origins

Arcane Experiments: Other legends claim that the keepers were the creations of Areya Fenthellis, 1st disciple of Shekelor, and last Factol of the Incantifers, a magic obsessed planar faction that was ultimately destroyed at the height of their power. Her creations still live on however, and so might she, still locked away in exile within the Mazes of the Lady of Pain.

Fiendish origins: Several archfiends have been linked to the creation of the keepers as servitors, among them Corin, the Lord of Espionage of Baator’s Dark Eight, as well as a long litany of noble Baatezu within the courts of Dispater and Levistus.
The most intriguing name linked to the keepers however, is one that is barely remembered: Larsdana Ap Neut, the designer and first lord of Gehenna’s Tower Arcane. A monstrously powerful arcanaloth and yugoloth lord, she may have created the keepers in secret, just before she was killed or imprisoned by her protégé, Helekanalaith, the current holder of her former position. Even beyond her race's obsession with secrets, the title she created and held within the yugoloth hierarchy was, quite suggestively, that of Keeper of the Tower.

Deific Creations: The keepers might be the creations of a deity of secrets, possibly ancient servitors of Vecna, Shar, the now dead Maanzecorian, or a forgotten deity whose corpse drifts unlamented through the silver void of the Astral. Alternatively, the keepers could be creations of Mnemosyne, the imprisoned Titan of Memory, wishing to gather secrets and knowledge outside the bounds of her prison in Carceri."

The following was cut from the Physiology section:

"Hints of any further detail into keeper anatomy are slim, given the beings’ rarity combined with their propensity to dissolve when killed or captured. Still, two sources of information exist. The first is an obscure book titled ‘Songs of Scream, Saw, Silence’, of either Yugoloth or Tanar’ri origin, which details in exquisite and macabre detail, the still living vivisection of nearly two hundred separate species of mortal, and includes a portrait of and a footnote on a creature bearing a close resemblance to a keeper. Referred to only by a numerical designation, likely a catalog notation from the book’s original source, the resemblance is uncanny. The volume describes the being as ‘a nuisance’ and speaks of it as an ‘eater of secrets’, adding ‘Let it choke on ours’.

Ultimately the book’s fiendish author laments that while he took steps to preserve the creature’s form, nearly all detail was lost during its attempts to commit suicide. What he recovered though seemed to suggest that the keeper’s body cavity contained a non-homogenous protoplasm-like liquid, composed of several immiscible, sequential layers, surrounded by a protective membrane: the creature’s glossy skin.

The only other source of detailed information comes from a series of torn and reassembled pages, supposedly discovered sewn into the backing of an unrelated tome purchased in the extraplanar city of Sigil. Regardless of its origin, the pages of this second source are decorated with elaborate illustrations intermixed between passages of cramped, coded writing in an apparently artificial script.

Though the writing remains undeciphered, the diagrams confirm a number of the claims of the previous fiendish author, except that this second source performed its examinations on a willing subject, possibly one still in the process of forming or growing. The document indicates that the outermost layer of liquid or other material closest to the skin can aggregate and differentiate into other structures, the source of the keepers’ minor metamorphic ability. The next layer down apparently functions in a hydraulic capacity, forcing itself against gravity and giving the keepers their oddly articulated motion.

Unfortunately the second source abruptly stops in mid sentence of its coded script, with any additional pages either misplaced or destroyed. Ultimately the sources leave behind tantalizing suggestions, but nothing firm, nothing pinned down and cataloged, no secrets left open to the light, only a situation that perfectly suits the keepers’ secretive nature."

And finally there was a 'D&D Origin of the Keeper Sidebar':

Unique to D&D, keepers first appeared in the 1995 Planescape Monstrous Compendium II by Richard Baker. Later, the 1997 module ‘Dead Gods’ mentions the keepers when Tenebrous (recently mentioned in the 3.5 Tome of Magic) pondered approaching them for information about the lost Wand of Orcus. In 3rd edition D&D, the 3e Fiend Folio reintroduced the keepers, finally bringing their mystery to a new generation of games and gamers alike.

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Material cut from Ecology of the Keepers in Dragon 353

THanks for posting that, it was interesting!

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